they look freakin rad like always mr. ryan. only two suggestions: how come the last two spreads have two colors but the first spread is only blue? i'd like to see that kickass image of ur guitar on the first page to be rotated so the bottom of the guitar is at the bottom. very nice!!!! -megan
cool stuff. i dig the minimalistic approach to the newsletter. i'm not so sure with the heading 'punk in persia'... not sure if you mean 'punk pin persia' or what have you.... if it is punk pin peria then it looks good. also, the body text might be a little hard to read since is so condensed onto the white background. not sure if it's just my monitor or what. i'd check that on print. if it looks better in print then yeah... sweet \mn/
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they look freakin rad like always mr. ryan. only two suggestions: how come the last two spreads have two colors but the first spread is only blue? i'd like to see that kickass image of ur guitar on the first page to be rotated so the bottom of the guitar is at the bottom. very nice!!!! -megan
cool stuff. i dig the minimalistic approach to the newsletter. i'm not so sure with the heading 'punk in persia'... not sure if you mean 'punk pin persia' or what have you.... if it is punk pin peria then it looks good. also, the body text might be a little hard to read since is so condensed onto the white background. not sure if it's just my monitor or what. i'd check that on print. if it looks better in print then yeah... sweet \mn/
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